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:iconmarrionetta:
So like. Someone asked me today why all my concepts are so bland. And I was like. AEKIHSDLGKSHGLDKSFHGFDLKHG

So I made this to make myself feel better. -tear tear-
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:iconcrispyfrieduke:
My third critique! Yay!

Okay, anyway, getting to the point here. This is about the art, after all!
Vision. It doesn't necessarily express any super special awesome form of idea to me. Granted, I might not totally get it if it's supposed to. I also think the design on the head is a bit bland compared to the beautiful detail on the body. Because of this, you get four and a half stars! We're off to a good start!

Originality, five stars! I really think this is nicely original. Quite loverly, really. The set up of the leg banding and the wings are especially unique and nice, I think.

Four stars for our next part, technique. I think it looks nice, especially in the shading and design, but I think some of the coloring on the tail and gold bit of the wing are a little strange. Th tail's fluffy bit has some very blank looking shading to it, and the gold part of the wing also looks somewhat bland. Other than that though, beautiful!

Impact! This didn't leave any amazed feeling with me. It's lovely, and I think I might have to borrow the color palette some day if that's fine with you, but it wasn't any "Oh my god, this is the most inspirational, amazing, fantastic thing I've ever seen ever! WOAH!"
You get four stars here too!

All in all, it's quite lovely, with great anatomy and nicely done shading, especially on the body! Keep it up Marri!
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~VriskaKick Apr 13, 2013  New member Hobbyist General Artist
CAN WE HAVE THIS PLEASE.
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:iconhaventide:
=Haventide Apr 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Honestly? I prefer the clean plainness to your work. Sprites that try to over-do themselves in such small spaces look messy and unprofessional to me.. But yours are so clear and lovely.
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:iconmarrionetta:
Soooo. I remade these, much larger. I will be posting them eventually too. :> Hehehe.
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:iconhaventide:
=Haventide May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
I'd love to see them! I'll be watching. :3
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:iconfirefox877:
woa its like so cool
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:iconverridith:
=Verridith Feb 13, 2010  Professional General Artist
FFFFFFFFFF <3

I want one. |D NAO. MARRI. D: /steals and tosses into her pile of pretty shinies- :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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:iconmarrionetta:
Awww you like this one? I'm pretty sure you'll like the Pandemonium Sentinel version better. ;3

Thanks. <3
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:iconverridith:
=Verridith Feb 13, 2010  Professional General Artist
P... Pandemonium Sentinel? 8DDDDDD
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:iconmarrionetta:
IM ME AND I WILL SHOW YOU. ;3
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:iconverridith:
=Verridith Feb 18, 2010  Professional General Artist
I SHALL ! ...MEEBO NO WORKY?! D8 /gets the bazooka-

And I wanna show you my egg practicing tooooooo. ;.;
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